Feedback for new Track
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2019-01-12 at 15:28:48 #64014,
JacksParticipanthttps://soundcloud.com/jackstonednb/unbenannt-36c-uberarbeitet-pre-master/s-Jimtk
Hello people I would be glad about a feedback.
Wish all a nice weekend 🙂
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2019-01-14 at 07:35:02 #64107,
shrikeParticipant“Oops, we couldn’t find that track”
Busted link, mate, please repost
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2019-01-14 at 07:46:08 #64108,JacksParticipant
Hi Shrike,
Sorry, have meanwhile a new version up.
Thanks 4 listening 🙂
Wish all a good week !
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2019-01-14 at 16:09:58 #64138,
SinchroneParticipantNice one! The only thing that sticks out to me, is during the third phrase (2:35 – 2:55), the repeating mid stab. Maybe reduce the number of hits I think, or just completely remove it, though that might be too drastic a move lol.
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2019-01-29 at 05:04:15 #64989,shrikeParticipant
This is nice. My only overall feedback is to work on the sc’ing of your kick and snare a bit more with the other elements. They are taking second stage, and for those moments of transient, I’d personally like to here them poke out a little more.
Very cool.
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2019-01-14 at 15:30:20 #64134,
Zero FourParticipantBassline is decent, Build up is good, maybe a tad long (that’s my opinion), I actually really dig the track though. Good job.
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2019-01-14 at 21:23:17 #64167,JacksParticipant
Thanks for your advice mates 🙂
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2019-01-20 at 22:02:18 #64532,
JOPPAParticipantnew tune WIP feedback please!!!!!
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2019-01-29 at 05:06:28 #64990,shrikeParticipant
Joppa!
Mate I think you are getting better, for sure.
This one has some balls on it. The bottom end is fit to burst, but manages to hold it together.
I do think that kick is a bit distorted, and not in the good way.
Heavy, tho, mate, very nice work.
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2019-01-29 at 15:50:11 #65013,JOPPAParticipant
thanks for the kind words shrike. im going to work on that kick add risers maybe some more fx and stuff lol
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2019-01-21 at 15:52:45 #64585,JacksParticipant
…HI…
Nice groove, i think more fx and riser samples for more tension on the end of the 16s.
The hihats are for mi gusto too in the back…..and the drums need more punch.
I think a good base to evolve the track.
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2019-01-28 at 16:44:22 #64949,JOPPAParticipant
no worries jacks yeah im going to take your advise
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2019-02-05 at 08:23:38 #67294,
Officialclimax420Participanthey guys so i got 2 versions and can’t decide would be nice if you could help me decide and also some feedback would be highly appreciated 😀
https://soundcloud.com/climaxdnb
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2019-02-05 at 14:00:01 #67332,Officialclimax420Participant
Thanks bro 🙂
https://soundcloud.com/climaxdnb
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2019-02-05 at 15:04:42 #67350,INVASIONParticipant
Would love some feedback on this track I have sort of finished.. It still needs something but I’m not sure what it is. Feels its lacking something.. Anyway hope you dig it! (influenced by the recent tutorials Arkaik has been putting up).
https://soundcloud.com/official-monster-dub-club/invasion-off-switch-self-master-1INVASION //: MONSTER DUB CLUB
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2019-02-05 at 15:16:11 #67351,
MartialistikzParticipantthat halftime switch is mental mate, straight banger 😀
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2019-02-05 at 15:17:31 #67352,INVASIONParticipant
Ahh cheers geezer!! Appreciate the feedback! ?
INVASION //: MONSTER DUB CLUB
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2019-02-05 at 21:47:02 #67379,Officialclimax420Participant
First thanks bro 🙂 and now to your track for me it feels like you should maybe try when those percussions hit you should maybe try to like cut the sub so it will flow with them or just use them every 8 and 16 bars, if you know what i mean! Because now your sub or bassline is just static (which i get your idea with but i think every 8 bars or 16 it wont hurt cutting it) and you should try to get a groove together with those short percussion hits every 8 or 16 bars! And also the silent hihat percs in the background are way to far in the background you should try to push them more into presence. And also i hear a little reverb over the snare really silent which i don’t really like but i thinks this is more or less personal preference cause it adds to the the deep feeling. And i really like the 2nd halfstep part but for me still the perc hits are way to less present! But other than that drums sounding quite tight bro nice tune!!!!! 😀
https://soundcloud.com/climaxdnb
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2019-02-06 at 16:37:22 #67455,INVASIONParticipant
Ahhh man. Thank you so much for the feedback. Really constructive. I will take away what you said and have a play about. I completely agree with you. I feel it lacks energy in some areas and changing up those percs will help a lot. Also I didn’t think about sidchaining them with the bass so I am definitely going to give that a go!
Thanks man, big up ?INVASION //: MONSTER DUB CLUB
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