july WIP

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    • #87375
      ,JOPPA
      Participant

      hey guys worked with julys sample pack and some mono synth. wanted to see if i should move forward with this?

    • #87376
      ,JOPPA
      Participant

    • #87997
      ,GENIE HQ
      Keymaster

      really sick sounds, lots of texture and clarity there too.

      Idea sounds like it needs some refining into something more musical, interesting, unique…

      • #88121
        ,JOPPA
        Participant

        thanks for the advice im working on it now got a ruff intro going to get some more fx breaks etc

    • #88313
      ,JOPPA
      Participant

      took my submission messed with that wave table to make the bass line used different drum samples for this version

    • #88630
      ,JOPPA
      Participant

    • #88631
      ,JOPPA
      Participant

      PLEASE feed back finish it or noe got like 500 works in progress lol im not a finisher

    • #88791
      ,GENIE HQ
      Keymaster

      Sounding much better for sure. There is maybe some bass missing on the 1, as in the first beat of each two bar section. Maybe a weighty kick or 808 style sub would help make the groove heavier.
      Some big low sub is what’s missing on this tune…
      mix is generally pretty good, nice stereo image.

      The tune is going to want a slick arrangement that progresses, staying simple but that tells a 4minute story.

    • #92158
      ,JOPPA
      Participant
    • #92842
      ,Suspecto
      Participant

      I really like the first half of the Follow Me WIP clip.

      As Genie HQ mentioned the low end could do with a bit more, but the beat is solid. The synth that comes in around 23 secs feels a little out of place for me. I reckon some off beat subbass in the first half of the track would be good for the groove overall.

      Keep working at it 🙂

      • #96915
        ,JOPPA
        Participant

        thanks sir will do

    • #108752
      ,JOPPA
      Participant

      New work in progress really loud so turn down your speakers not sure actual tempo

      https://soundcloud.com/joppabeats/joppa-legislation/s-Cqno4

    • #108753
      ,JOPPA
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    • #113125
      ,JOPPA
      Participant

      new WIP please let me know what you think so far

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