WIP first upload in a long time. feedback very welcome
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2016-06-12 at 15:28:19 #14307,
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2016-06-13 at 17:13:18 #14314,
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2016-06-16 at 15:22:21 #14352,
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Keymasterwow really cool. Fresh feeling to this. lovely clean mix too 🙂
possibly having no rhythmic parts in the break down could be a pain when comes to mixing it with other tunes? Small detail though,,-
2016-06-18 at 05:41:03 #14369,
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ParticipantThanks you for the feedback :). I still need to write that breakdown actually it is pretty uninspiring as it is. You are right though will have to work on some rhythmic element to go there. I get the feeling the drums are too upfront or i need to do some end bar edits or something so it gives your ears a break from the drum loop. just not sure how to move forward and make it sound like a finished track.
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2016-06-25 at 17:19:01 #14464,
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ParticipantHere is the second formation of this idea. Let me know what you think.
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2016-06-26 at 15:40:30 #14465,
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Participantnew name few more tweaks and i think i will let this go. It has changed quite a lot from the original idea. It is hard to get perspective of it to think of further improvements. What do you guys think?
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2016-06-29 at 05:42:42 #14500,
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ParticipantMan its like 2 steps forward one step back. last one I uploaded got deleted as you can see, that was a step backwards. Its form is still changing hopefully be finished over the next few days. I am a little worried the bass sound at the drop might be annoying/repetitive or abrasive to some as well as the skattery hats? like the heaviness the bass provides tho so still trying to figure out how to keep it interesting. The hats give it the pace so i dont want to get rid of them completely. Do they come across harsh to you guys?
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2016-06-29 at 13:10:30 #14503,
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2016-06-29 at 21:17:09 #14555,
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KeymasterThis is feeling great, deep vibes, lovely intro..
maybe a touch more clarity in the snare, just a bit more clarity would make them pop a bit?
maybe a tiny a bit more top end fizz overall..
awesome tune though, very impressive!
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2016-06-30 at 11:51:35 #14565,
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ParticipantAwesome man thank you for the feedback. really helps!
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