Just finish my first beat ! ( deep & techy)
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2019-08-15 at 10:05:14 #93193,herson.williamParticipant
just need some feedback to finish it completely ! Thanks 😀
https://soundcloud.com/william-herson/odalisq-suppose-to-be-pre-master/s-QZpSx
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2019-08-15 at 12:03:34 #93207,GENIE HQKeymaster
remarkably good for a first tune. If that’s true… wow.
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2019-08-15 at 12:19:14 #93212,herson.williamParticipant
thank you so much ! and yes that’s true I wanted to release something that I really liked !
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2019-08-15 at 17:25:39 #93239,GENIE HQKeymaster
You’ve captured a vibe 😀
It’s perhaps reminiscent of decypher by Kasra and Mefjus (not a criticism), but by no means a copy.
Nice switch up on the second dropOnly feedback might be:
– The snare could maybe do with very slightly more transient? the hats seem perhaps louder than the snare which might be detrimental to a club mix.
(Decypher would be a good reference track for the mix on this)– Is the sub in the bass resonating unevenly in places?
– Might be nice to have a bit more time when it’s more just drums and bass, stripped out the atmos and fx etc for a bit before bringing it back in
Great work! Solid 8/10 on this one.
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2019-08-21 at 20:17:46 #93859,herson.williamParticipant
thanks for the advice ! I made a final version (I hope so) following these tips.
https://soundcloud.com/william-herson/odalisq-suppose-to-be-final-version-2/s-2gOrj
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2019-08-23 at 20:44:35 #94055,GENIE HQKeymaster
Definitely big improvements all round.
The only other area that perhaps could make the tune more impressive would be a bigger sub bass mix sitting with the kick.
The Kick is really well defined but if somehow you could get the low end from the bass line ‘hugging’ the listener a bit more it would REALLY bring this kind of minimal tune to life. That kick and sub bass relationship is key on this kind of track…
From there things like a bit more air in the top end will be the final polish.very impressive stuff though – keep it up!
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