Just finish my first beat ! ( deep & techy)

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    • #93193

      just need some feedback to finish it completely ! Thanks 😀


    • #93207
      ,GENIE HQ

      remarkably good for a first tune. If that’s true… wow.

    • #93212

      thank you so much ! and yes that’s true I wanted to release something that I really liked !

    • #93239
      ,GENIE HQ

      You’ve captured a vibe 😀

      It’s perhaps reminiscent of decypher by Kasra and Mefjus (not a criticism), but by no means a copy.
      Nice switch up on the second drop

      Only feedback might be:

      – The snare could maybe do with very slightly more transient? the hats seem perhaps louder than the snare which might be detrimental to a club mix.
      (Decypher would be a good reference track for the mix on this)

      – Is the sub in the bass resonating unevenly in places?

      – Might be nice to have a bit more time when it’s more just drums and bass, stripped out the atmos and fx etc for a bit before bringing it back in

      Great work! Solid 8/10 on this one.

    • #93859

      thanks for the advice ! I made a final version (I hope so) following these tips.


    • #94055
      ,GENIE HQ

      Definitely big improvements all round.
      The only other area that perhaps could make the tune more impressive would be a bigger sub bass mix sitting with the kick.
      The Kick is really well defined but if somehow you could get the low end from the bass line ‘hugging’ the listener a bit more it would REALLY bring this kind of minimal tune to life. That kick and sub bass relationship is key on this kind of track…
      From there things like a bit more air in the top end will be the final polish.

      very impressive stuff though – keep it up!

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